Chungshan Medical University
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Academic Writing Practice - CSMU
James Toon

Instructor

James

Writing a Patient Update

MAY 4

Assignment Instructions

Write one paragraph (50 to 80 words) about the patient below. Your paragraph must include:

  • Linking Phrase: However, Therefore, Additionally, etc.
  • Hedging Words: appears, suggests, possibly, etc.
  • Nominalization: "The patient's complaint" vs "The patient complained".

Patient Information Profile

  • Patient: 22-year-old female
  • Symptoms: Sharp pain in right ankle
  • Condition: Swollen; X-ray normal
  • Plan: Rest & Ice (48 hours)

Learning Goal

Master professional clinical updates using formal tone and cautious language.

 
Professional Writing Space (May 4)
System: Ready
Word/Answer Count: 0
Target: 50-80 words