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Academic Writing Practice - CSMU
The Academic Makeover
APR 27
Assignment Instructions
Rewrite the following colloquial medical text into a formal, objective style suitable for a professional medical journal.
Original Colloquial Text
"A 45-year-old man came in with a really bad headache and a big fever. We looked into his history and found out he had a surgery three weeks ago. We did a CT scan to rule out any bleeding. The scan showed a small infection. We gave him antibiotics and he got better quite fast over the next few days."
- ✔ Objective Tone: Avoid personal pronouns ("We looked into", "We did", "We gave").
- ✔ Medical Terminology: Upgrade casual vocabulary (e.g., "really bad headache" → severe cephalalgia / acute headache; "big fever" → high-grade fever / pyrexia).
- ✔ Sentence Structure: Utilize nominalization and passive voice where appropriate to enhance academic flow.
Key Focus
Eliminating colloquial reporting to establish an authoritative clinical narrative.
Writing a Patient Update
MAY 4
Assignment Instructions
Write one paragraph (50 to 80 words) about the patient below. Your paragraph must include:
- ✔ Linking Phrase: However, Therefore, Additionally, etc.
- ✔ Hedging Words: appears, suggests, possibly, etc.
- ✔ Nominalization: "The patient's complaint" vs "The patient complained".
Patient Information Profile
- Patient: 22-year-old female
- Symptoms: Sharp pain in right ankle
- Condition: Swollen; X-ray normal
- Plan: Rest & Ice (48 hours)
Learning Goal
Master professional clinical updates using formal tone and cautious language.
Practice 1b (Prepositions)
MAY 13
Assignment Instructions
Complete each sentence with a complex preposition plus one of the words/phrases from the box below. Fill in your answers directly in the input boxes.
Word Pool
2001
1945
a hat
his competitors
me
the hill
two policemen
your house
Grammar Note
Complex prepositions consist of two or three words functioning as a single preposition (e.g., in front of, in between, prior to, on top of, out of, ahead of, next to).
Disadvantages of Smoking Ban
MAY 20
Assignment Instructions
Use the ideas and references below to write a summary of the Disadvantages of Implementing a Smoking Ban in Public Places.
- ✔ Length: 100 - 150 words (Exactly ONE paragraph)
- ✔ Citations: Include at least THREE in-text citations
- ✔ Skills: At least ONE direct quotation & ONE paraphrase
- (No references list at the end is required for this assignment)
Available Sources & References
Source #1
"A ban is discriminative towards smokers, it would be against the European Convention on human rights and would also be against peoples' freedom of choice"
— (Smith, 2015)
Source #2
"Industry self-regulation is the solution. This can be done by reducing advertising, limiting packaging branding and raising the age of smoking"
— (Paul, 2014)
Source #3
"The Link between passive smoking and ill health is unproven. There have been many studies that have been inconclusive in the claim that passive smoking is dangerous"
— (Peterson et al., 2013)
Source #4
"A public smoking ban will damage businesses. The producers and sellers will be hardest hit and a ban may cause many businesses to go into bankruptcy"
— (Wilson, 2012)
Source #5
"A ban will reduce tax revenue for Government. The loss of tax from cigarettes is estimated to be £4bn a year"
— (The Economist, 2015)
Source #6
"There is no evidence as yet that smokers will give up smoking in huge numbers if legislation is put in place"
— (BBC news, 2013)
Source #7
"Opponents of the legislation fear that it would push adults to smoke more at home, and therefore put children at greater risk of secondhand smoke"
— (The New Scientist, 2012)
Source #8
"a ban would create a significant rise in electronic cigarettes (e-cigarettes), which are a relatively new product and lack scientific research in their health risks"
— (Jones et al., 2009)
Professional Writing Space (May 4)
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